Your True Tales for December 2011
Name of story:Hot Lake Hotel Ghosts
Sounds like a good story and somewhat believable. Are you sure that rusty butcher knife was thrown from a window or was just found outside. I imagine that under normal circumstances they wouldn't allow you to trespass unless you were a cultural archeologist. They wouldn't let you dig up treasures on the property like that. The story wasn't that scarey either. The decription of the place and the area wasn't enough for me and there was only the one event of a knife being throw down. Even that wouldn't be extremely scarey if it happened in the daylight. But the story has some possibilities just needs a little more meat to it. Maybe you could have walked into the place because it started to rain.
Your advice for the author
Needs more meat.